Narrative





Act 1:
It is a grey morning,  Simon is at his home staring intensely  at the window of the rain , he looks down at the newspaper circling  places that allow you to rent cars. He found the perfect one for a cheaper price . he looks back at the clock he sees that it 11:00am which means that his ex girlfriend is at work . Simon sits on his blue cheap plastic chair, He turns the television on and the woman on news announces the traffic on the M24 to north london and he watches it with a smile on his face and fingers on his lips because he believes that everything will go to plan . As he watches the television , the kettle is making a high pitched sound , which means its ready , he pours the boiling water into his mug that read the greatest boyfriend ever . he goes back into his seat. Looks at the clock behind him and realises its
11:15 He calls his ex girlfriend, Natasha ,the second she picks up the phone and say ‘hello’ , he doesn't reply and then she ends the call . he looks at his phone , he saved her as loml ( love of my life ). 
He ends up drinking his tea and goes to his room and changes his outfit into all black and he checks the time again and realises it's time to make a move . 


ACT 2 :
Simon gets into his car goes to rent a car shop , he speaks to the owner and asks the man how much a black hyundai car would cost more than  what he expected, he started trying to convince the manager to lower the price so that he could take the manager took it for 3k he shook the manager hands as soon as he turned around he saw Natasha  boyfriend , trey , staring at him across the road of a cafe he gave him a blank expression on his face with a twist of hatred because of what happened last year with him and trey last year . He gets into his new car and starts his engine . he drives away he stops and goes to mcdonalds and get a burger and fries and drives off with his food and he stops by a house of a victorian looking house stares at the house ,as if he was scanning the place ,as if he can see who’s inside and see who’s coming .

 He continuously looks at his phone and keeps checking the time . he slowly got out of his car and walked calmly to the front door, he tries to force the door open but nothing happened , he tried to many entrances like the windows in the front and backyard and he also tries breaking but it seems impossible for him and he then get his credit card out and he puts it in between the door and the wall . he gets in and there's a slick smile on his face .   

 ACT 3
As he entered the house he heard footsteps approaching the stairs , he quickly hid in the cloakroom , the person thats was coming down the stairs was his ex Natasha , she was wearing a white cotton bathroom robe with furry ugg slippers , she went into the kitchen and run a tap of cold water as she is running the cold water, she looks at the window , contemplating her life , fiddling with the diamond ring on her finger as she does that tears struck down on her cheek and she wipes it away and grabs a crystal glass cup from the cupboard and put under running water , she takes her sip of cold water and leaves the water on the kitchen table as she does this simon slightly opens the cloakroom door and takes a peak at what she is doing and his eyes twinkle when he her. He keeps looking at the clock because he knows its time or the poison wouldn't work . he closes the cloakroom and Natasha goes upstairs to the bathroom and runs the shower and slams the door . he gets out of the cloakroom and put the white powder in the water and gets a silver spoon and mixes the drink and leaves the spoon beside the cup .



Act 4
Simon  goes upstairs with his he goes into her bedroom and he walks in a slow pace around her bedroom and starts to open ups her wardrobe and starts to smell her clothes her  hair brush . the shower water stops and she starts to get out of the shower . he goes downstairs and runs out the door and swiftly get into his car . 


His ex girlfriend suddenly gets a feeling like someone is inside the house and she starts realising that some stuff is out of place like her clothes.she goes downstairs to check if someone is down . simon got out of the car and sneaks back into the house , Natasha grabs the water and takes a sip but she realised the spoon on the table and puts the water down , she turns around and she sees her boyfriend standing behind her with a rope in his hand and he strangled her on the neck with the rope , they both struggle moving around in the kitchen and she struggles screaming for help and they are moving around she sees a sharp kitchen knife and grabs it . she is then able to stab him in the leg and the rope around her neck begins to loosen and she is able to run to the door until he catches up to her and starts to shut door but she opens it up again and she then runs outside and and screams for help, she runs across the road ,as soon as he catches up to her , a black car hits simon and his body starts to roll over the car.the car stops , the opens and Trey gets out of the car with a shocked expression across his , he looks at Natasha with remorsefulness and she looks at him crying and going on her knees weeping and wailing

Act 5

The ambulance comes and takes Simon dead  body into the van and drove off , the police ask natasha , she explains what happened and she started to cry . as Natasha and Trey go back into the house she walks to kitchen and spills the poison water away and she looks at the window and a smile appears across her face as she is happy now that her ex boyfriend is dead she looks at Trey , she goes into her bag she gets out her black notebook and plots ways to kill him when she breaks up with him

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